Application Text

post u'r idea for our village application text

We should put something like "Mugiwara is a great place to grow seeing as we have alot more bonus's than most villages. We are looking for active players that will place the village ahead of themselves." that's what I have to offer. You might also want to add a little short "We love one piece" thing in there too to catch some peoples eyes, that's one of the main reasons why I joined mugiwara is because it is One piece related and the bonus's.

"Join Mugiwara Today! We were one of the first villages ever made and even some KageKaiju came from this village. Mugiwara offers almost every upgrade in the entire game. You can ascend to Sannin and gain many other bonuses. With our help, you'll be one of the strongest players on BvS. Anyone can join! You won't regret coming inside this great village."

My suggestion for the application text.

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Sounds a bit " boasty " and corny. If you could make it sound a bit more firm, or something I'll use it.

I'll use it for now as well though.

Oh, it's got to be 53 spaces shorter. 300 space limit.

Blazer wrote:Sounds a bit " boasty " and corny.

Aren't we supposed to boast about ourselves ? You can take out some stuff if you feel it shouldn't be there.

True, but it still sounds a little corny. I've already edited it and put it in.

Jio Freed wrote:

Blazer wrote:Sounds a bit " boasty " and corny.

Aren't we supposed to boast about ourselves ? You can take out some stuff if you feel it shouldn't be there.

Oh, and I didn't realise you weren't in the village anymore. I think I recall you saying you were leaving, or what not. Are you coming back? :S

Blazer wrote:Oh, and I didn't realise you weren't in the village anymore. I think I recall you saying you were leaving, or what not. Are you coming back? :S

I'm coming back on November 29th.

Jio Freed wrote:

Blazer wrote:Oh, and I didn't realise you weren't in the village anymore. I think I recall you saying you were leaving, or what not. Are you coming back? :S

I'm coming back on November 29th.

Oh, good stuff. Why such a specific date?

Blazer wrote:

Jio Freed wrote:I'm coming back on November 29th.

Oh, good stuff. Why such a specific date?

It was the first day I played the game and joined Mugiwara.

Jio Freed wrote:

Blazer wrote:

Jio Freed wrote:I'm coming back on November 29th.

Oh, good stuff. Why such a specific date?

It was the first day I played the game and joined Mugiwara.

Oh sweet. I honestly don't remember the exact day I joined. How come you've left us anyway?

Blazer wrote:Oh sweet. I honestly don't remember the exact day I joined. How come you've left us anyway?

I wanted to see how other people ran their villages.

Jio Freed wrote:

Blazer wrote:Oh sweet. I honestly don't remember the exact day I joined. How come you've left us anyway?

I wanted to see how other people ran their villages.

Well, that's good. I look forward to you coming back.

Here is my idea

"You want the ultimate treasure OnePiece" Join Mugiwara
or
" Join the power of a real Pirate Crew" Join Mugiwara

these quotes imply more to people who like one piece to join though

What's wrong with the Village text we have now?

Takezo wrote:What's wrong with the Village text we have now?

Depends on what you mean " Right Now ", since it's already been changed once or twice.

Question what do the colors of our forum names represent?
Is is random or do they have to do with how many posts we have done?

Red = Admin
Blue = Moderator
Green = Village Council
Purple = Villager
Light Pink = Non-Villager.

Although since some people are a member of more than one group it seem's to have the colour of the newest group they were put in. Although I'm unsure, riex done it so he'll know more about it.